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Monday, August 5, 2019

How to Write a Quality Blog Comment 5.8.19

Tips For Writing a Quality Comment




If you like the writer post, you should tell them.Make sure you write positive comments.If you know something they don't know about the topic, tell them, but first look at the other comments so you don't repeat the same information.Tell the if you have done the same thing, or have an experience with it.If you have a question, end off your comment with it.Proofread your comment so you don't make mistakes. If you use the pronoun I, you must capitalize it. 

Friday, August 2, 2019

Was he the king of peka peka beach? 13/6/19

This is about what happened to happy feet who git beached on the north island of NZ




In my opinion I think what they did for Happy Feet, was good, but I think they spent too much money making him back to perfect health. They did a good job, but they should have not made it so he was that well. They used a lot of money on ONE living thing. They should have tried, but not as much as they did. They let their emotions take over their decisions. We did get a lot of money back, but we didn't know at the time, so it was a huge risk, but luckily, it paid off. A pretty big downside of it was that after five days we lost connection to the tracking collar, so maybe that was all for nothing. We might have spent a lot of time and money on something that we don't know if it lasted five days.

F45 fitness advertisement.


For writing we are doing persuasive writing. I did an ad for F45 fitness. It is to encourage people to go to a gym and get fitter and healthy!